Wednesday, August 19, 2015

Persuasive Writing - Term 3 Week 5


WALT persuade other students to agree with our opinion.  This the purpose for my writing.
Success Criteria:

  1. I plan for a writing task
  2. I write a variety of sentence lengths with different sentence starters
  3. Give reasons with detail - use specific words
  4. I write most topic and high frequency words correctly.
  5. I use capital letters, full stops, question marks and exclamation marks correctly.
  6. Use persuasive language

ALIENS ARE REAL
I strongly believe that Aliens are real.  There are three main reasons to support my argument.


There is no reason they should not be able to live without air.
Air may be nothing to them. They might not need air! They might not know what it is! Because we can’t live without air does not mean that they can’t. They don’t have to be so much like us, we arent the only form of life! They might be just like us but upside down! They will use their head to walk and legs to eat and drink if they are like that!

We don’t know all the planets
Our solar system isn’t in the only galaxy. There are loads more! We know a lot of them, but not all!  Space goes on forever, maybe they live in a galaxy heaps and heaps of miles away.



They might not need planets at all
There is no proof that aliens can’t just float around in the space in space, because when people ask “do aliens exist”, they have to see aliens having contact with earth to start believing that they do. That is why people send off rovers to find alien life form. The aliens move from the planet, we can’t catch them any more. When we try to send rovers out of the solar system, the aliens crash them. They must be worried that we will find them. They must have seen we are smarter than they think, so they don’t live on any planet. Just float in space. They thought that we were not smart because we call their UFO’s UFO’s! (Unidentified flying objects). Because we call them unidentified, they think we can’t find them. But we can! They think they are a step ahead, but them and us are even. When they find that out, they will live in the UFO, that is in space, not on any planet. Even if we don’t know what they are.

Therefore I believe Aliens are real.  

 

2 comments:

  1. Hi Liam, you did really well with this piece of writing. I enjoyed our conversations around this topic, you have good main points and plenty of detail to back your ideas up. Next step - maybe some more detail in your 2nd main idea about the planets would be useful.

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  2. I really liked that story it persuaded me to think that aliens are real even tho I thought alians were real in the first place well done.

    Keep up the great work

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