Country life is better than City life - Term Three Week 4

WALT persuade other students to agree with our opinion.  This the purpose for my writing.

Success Criteria:

1. I plan for a writing task
2. I write a variety of sentence lengths with different sentence starters
3. Give reasons with detail - use specific words
4. I write most topic and high frequency words correctly.
5. I use capital letters, fullstops, question marks and exclamation marks correctly.
6. Use persuasive language

Country life is better than city life.

I strongly believe that country life is better than city life because of the following…

You can have more fun

You can have more fun because you have lots of places to go that you don’t know about. If you turn left and go on for 20 yards you’ll get to big save or mighta ten mega store cause in the city you know where everything is. 
In the country you might bump into four new lambs born the day before.You can go somewhere new every day. You usually are by the beach and the beach is lots of fun!

You can have more pets.

You can usually have more pets because there is less pollution to kill them from the factories that the city's have more of. The pollution  is even bad for us. Furthermore, it is a better environment for the animals because there are a lot of places to grow plants and grass. You could even have a farm, its such good environment!

Moooooore… sunshine!!!

Evidence shows that if you concentrated you would notice lots of tall buildings that are blocking the sunshine. For example, the country has less skyscrapers so nothing can block the sun. There are less pollution/grey sky from the cars and factories that cities have more of to block it as well.

Therefore, I believe country life is better than city life. BA BAAAAA!!!